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1le pivot Empty le pivot on Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:42 pm

Oui Lee

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Last edited by Oui Lee on Sun Apr 17, 2011 10:22 am; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : Since I still can...)

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2le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:48 pm

L'archl

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Everything, except the iron pipe, iron pipes are kewl.


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3le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:50 pm

Oui Lee

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You could say what I should do better, and how...

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4le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:50 pm

L'archl

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I told you what to do better, everything.

You should do it by doing it better.


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5le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:51 pm

Oui Lee

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That doesn't help me at all.... If I could do it better, I would...

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6le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:08 pm

Rawbeef


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Allen walker wrote:I told you what to do better, everything.

You should do it by doing it better.
If your posts were better i'm sure he could do better. Strike 1, walker.
As for the animation, it is very stiff. You should try to move every joint of the stick figures every frame, even if only slightly.

7le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:28 pm

Arctic5oul


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Move every join in the frame, even if it's only a pixel. Every movement counts, for it made it look stiff. I can see you're pretty involved with pivot effects, so I'm gonna tell you to add more detail to the lazer blast thing. Particles and trails is the key. It's a little under-eased. But I'm sure a little tweaks could fix it.
Nice animation, make more so we can fully rank you, but for now I'm gonna rank you Med-Rookie.

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8le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:01 pm

Snoop Lion

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your not rusty you are the same I guess you can do what wolf said...
try to move every joint and dont' overease or it will look sloooow

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9le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:31 pm

Arctic5oul


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Big bump, lol?

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10le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:37 pm

Snoop Lion

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crap I didn't see the date

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11le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:54 pm

Oui Lee

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I updated it today, and I think the thing wølf say is kind of the only tips I've heard the past months...

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12le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:38 pm

Arctic5oul


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Oui Lee wrote:I updated it today, and I think the thing wølf say is kind of the only tips I've heard the past months...

Then follow them.

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13le pivot Empty Re: le pivot on Thu Apr 14, 2011 3:45 pm

TrinityFlash

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Well, I'll be nice enough to give some criticism.

Why is there only one limb moving in all of your recent animations? You need to work with other limbs, otherwise you'll never improve in full, smooth movement. You're pretty much practicing "how to be stiff"

Honestly, you'd probably be better off practicing gravity with a ball the way you're currently animating.

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