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Oui Lee
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1my anims - Page 3 Empty my anims Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:30 pm

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First topic message reminder :

These are my animations!please comment and rate


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http://yourimg.in/m/3s2tag6.gif
Kick combo


http://yourimg.in/m/99v574r.gif
Combo Short


http://yourimg.in/m/5qu408i.gif
Drop n punch



http://yourimg.in/m/hse65jb.gif
Wall flip

http://yourimg.in/m/wfm6p6i.gif
Step

http://yourimg.in/m/d76yh40.gif
Punch/Reaction test

http://yourimg.in/j/k9gs57a.gif
Blind wu kick

http://yourimg.in/j/885u8cg.gif
Blind wu combo

very happy rate an comment!!!



Last edited by Beast on Wed May 11, 2011 9:52 pm; edited 11 times in total

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51my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Tue May 03, 2011 7:11 pm

Arctic5oul


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The knee in your kick was bending back and forth at an unrealistic pace. When you kick, you want momentum, and by bending the leg back ruins the momentum of the kick. Try kicking a pillow or something, as hard as you can, and feel you legs and what they do.

Overall, that was a really good animation. You're really improving.

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52my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Sat May 07, 2011 8:10 pm

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UPDATE:
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Random movements

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53my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Sun May 08, 2011 5:56 pm

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UPDATE:
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a little trails test thing

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54my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Sun May 08, 2011 9:02 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

On the random movements, you ACED the physics in the first part, but it was ruined on the second, when he flips.
The train test was also very nice in the kick, but the back went stiff and the leg snapped. Watch the shaky feet too.

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55my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Sun May 08, 2011 9:12 pm

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Wølf wrote:On the random movements, you ACED the physics in the first part, but it was ruined on the second, when he flips.
The train test was also very nice in the kick, but the back went stiff and the leg snapped. Watch the shaky feet too.
ok thanks.i'll work on those

lol IDK why but i always get excited when i see you commented on my thread Razz

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56my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Wed May 11, 2011 6:18 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

Because I am experienced at giving constructive criticism. I just can't follow my own! Sad

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57my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Wed May 11, 2011 6:39 pm

Rawbeef


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Beast wrote:my anims - Page 3 296n248
The kick was fixed somewhat here in that it has power behind it. However, after the initial movement you failed to slow it down. Near the height of the kick, the leg should decelerate in it's upward motion. After that, start easing it downwards. I hope i'm making sense because I'm horrible at explaining things.

58my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Wed May 11, 2011 9:37 pm

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Rabees wrote:
Beast wrote:my anims - Page 3 296n248
The kick was fixed somewhat here in that it has power behind it. However, after the initial movement you failed to slow it down. Near the height of the kick, the leg should decelerate in it's upward motion. After that, start easing it downwards. I hope i'm making sense because I'm horrible at explaining things.
yea i get it

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59my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Thu May 19, 2011 7:22 pm

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UPDATE:
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lift n kick

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60my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Thu May 19, 2011 10:03 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

Shaky, it's just really shaky.

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61my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Thu May 19, 2011 10:24 pm

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thats it?
just shaky? happy

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62my anims - Page 3 Empty Re: my anims Fri May 27, 2011 6:16 pm

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UPDATE:
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butterfly kick

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