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Oui Lee
L'archl
Arctic5oul
Claire
Taken™
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1my anims - Page 2 Empty my anims Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:30 pm

Taken™

Taken™
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First topic message reminder :

These are my animations!please comment and rate


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my anims - Page 2 347ab5i




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http://yourimg.in/m/3s2tag6.gif
Kick combo


http://yourimg.in/m/99v574r.gif
Combo Short


http://yourimg.in/m/5qu408i.gif
Drop n punch



http://yourimg.in/m/hse65jb.gif
Wall flip

http://yourimg.in/m/wfm6p6i.gif
Step

http://yourimg.in/m/d76yh40.gif
Punch/Reaction test

http://yourimg.in/j/k9gs57a.gif
Blind wu kick

http://yourimg.in/j/885u8cg.gif
Blind wu combo

very happy rate an comment!!!



Last edited by Beast on Wed May 11, 2011 9:52 pm; edited 11 times in total

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26my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:59 pm

Rawbeef


Administrator

They're both really freakin' short but I see improvement. I think.

27my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Tue Apr 12, 2011 10:09 pm

Taken™

Taken™
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i don't have any balls in the house
i had a soccer ball,but we lost it when it flew across a wall in out backyard and onto a busy street :/

https://www.youtube.com/user/TakenChoice

28my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Tue Apr 12, 2011 10:20 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

^Are you able to use your head?
happy
Just kidding. I'll PM you an example.

http://www.pivotcity.forumotion.com

29my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Thu Apr 14, 2011 4:57 pm

Rawbeef


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An animator once told me to watch how somebody moves while jumping on a bed. The springiness makes it easier to observe the acceleration and deceleration.

30my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:59 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

Rabees wrote:An animator once told me to watch how somebody moves while jumping on a bed. The springiness makes it easier to observe the acceleration and deceleration.
Exactly

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31my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Thu Apr 14, 2011 10:52 pm

Taken™

Taken™
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UPDATE:
my anims - Page 2 Hse65jb Wall Flip
i tried my best to make sure i got the foot placement and easing,it turned out good to me but its super slow even at 33 fps :/
CC? very happy

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32my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:33 am

Arctic5oul


Explorer

If it's at 33fps, make the space bigger between movements. That may be your problem. The normal animating rate is from 14 through 21. Just make the space bigger when moving. Space = onion skin. That may solve your easing problem, because it still ins't eased.

http://www.pivotcity.forumotion.com

33my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Sat Apr 16, 2011 9:32 am

Taken™

Taken™
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UPDATE:
my anims - Page 2 5qu408i
Drop n punch

https://www.youtube.com/user/TakenChoice

34my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Sat Apr 16, 2011 5:05 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

Shaky and stiff.
Keep the body moving in one direction, and when you change, ease it.

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35my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:43 pm

Taken™

Taken™
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UPDATE:
my anims - Page 2 714911kickcombo
Kick combo

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36my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Tue Apr 26, 2011 11:07 pm

Codec

Codec
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Your improving.
I'll let the rest comment for CC Razz

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37my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:03 am

Oui Lee

Oui Lee
Explorer

This is like a big revolution of your animating, it's a bit to stiff, you need to use more flow, and to move all the joints in every frame, like you make the force of speed and moverment move the outter joints... Sorry for bad explanation.

https://pivotcity.forumotion.com/u10

38my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:04 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

One small step for monkeiz.
One giant leap for Beast.

Idk. happy

It was a great improvement. Very smooth too! You got easing down, well not completely but you are doing much better. Now just work on realism and fix stiffness. Another easy problem to fix is foot placement. I looked at your feet (for the time they were on the ground) and it was really shaky.

http://www.pivotcity.forumotion.com

39my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:28 pm

Taken™

Taken™
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Wølf wrote:One small step for monkeiz.
One giant leap for Beast.

Idk. happy

It was a great improvement. Very smooth too! You got easing down, well not completely but you are doing much better. Now just work on realism and fix stiffness. Another easy problem to fix is foot placement. I looked at your feet (for the time they were on the ground) and it was really shaky.
lol can't believe you didn't notice the shaky head.
anyways i've been waiting for you to come and give CC.
i'm glad to see improving
high-beg yet?

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40my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:29 pm

Snoop Lion

Snoop Lion
Junior member

not even close
lol

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41my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Thu Apr 28, 2011 5:55 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

Beast wrote:lol can't believe you didn't notice the shaky head.
Now i see it.
Make sure you catch it in time before you post. happy


@Dustin
You are no help. I hereby banish you.
~BANISH~

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42my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:58 am

Taken™

Taken™
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UPDATE:
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Chair flop

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43my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Sun May 01, 2011 3:51 pm

Taken™

Taken™
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UPDATE:
my anims - Page 2 782850Swordshit
Sword shit
got bored...really bored

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44my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Sun May 01, 2011 4:04 pm

Snoop Lion

Snoop Lion
Junior member

amazing! you really are improving
I don't know much about cc but It looks great

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45my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Sun May 01, 2011 4:33 pm

Arctic5oul


Explorer

The sword... did it go through the ground?
Make it more 3-D-ish so it won't look like that.
The Chair Flop lacked physics at the beginning and looked awkward. I can't really explain it.

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46my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Sun May 01, 2011 6:40 pm

Taken™

Taken™
Administrator

lol it took you long enough
i'm not good at 3-D in pivot :/

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47my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Mon May 02, 2011 3:58 pm

Codec

Codec
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Chair flop it's like

"HOLY JEEZZZUUSSS! GRAVITY, WHAR DID J00 GO?"

Lacks physics, he just goes flying back on the chair.

As for the Sword, meh.

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48my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Mon May 02, 2011 10:09 pm

Taken™

Taken™
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UPDATE:my anims - Page 2 Lh9c7se
Combo Short

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49my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Tue May 03, 2011 4:17 pm

Rawbeef


Administrator

The main problem I see is the kick. It should be spaced heavier to look more powerful. Your foot placement is slightly off too. Everything else looks pretty good I think.

50my anims - Page 2 Empty Re: my anims Tue May 03, 2011 6:31 pm

Codec

Codec
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IMO Low Inter, or high novice,.

As you can tell, I rank easy.

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